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Is BlueGem's Story going to slow to the plot? Not moving fast enough to the point?
369 votes
I think it's fine like it is!
Maybe more dialog to explain what is going on.
Less Jokes, More action!
Too slow! 9 Pages and I'm still not getting what is going on.
Suggestions? (Comment plz)
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Would you say Pitch is more Like...
| 213 votes
- Ebenezer Scrooge
- The Grinch
- Doctor Jekyll & Mr. Hyde
- Something Else (comment)
If it could become true, what would you prefer to see f...
| 154 votes
- A whole Comic.
- An animated video.
- A flash animation.
- A song about her.
- A role in a mini-videogame.
- Pointy/Humour Strip Comics.
- A Fan-fic.
- I don´t know who Pitch is.
Would you be interested if i open my Commissions? --> h...
| 103 votes
- Yes!
- Only if you would accept points...
- I can´t pay
- No thanks... no interest
- What kind of commission are you most interested in? (Comment)
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As some other people have said, its a slow start. But im enjoying the humor and its a treat to see it every Sunday. Gives me something to look forward to. Judging by the preview of the next page, were getting to the story